Colors and serious model seem perfect. I found myself a bit bothered by the placement of the fan, although I do think the fan really added to the image because it made me feel like the day was quite hot and she was worn out.
this is a really cool image even though Im not sure it meets the style. Im going to take a stab at guessing how this was done. All the lights off, open shutter, expose with flash, cover the lens and then lightly expose for model?? Either way will be interested to see how it was done.