Fascinating. I like the tilt/shift effect on this one, and even though the added texture is a bit much, it has the feel of a film double exposure and honestly it really works in this case. Excellent job overall.
I love the composition and the photo itself but the editing seems a bit overdone for me. The far off horizon has become a mere wall. In itself this may be the idea - so in one respect it is about the frustrations of life itself - where the future seems so wide open but the reality of life seems to hold us back as we are mere observers of our fate. But even with the metaphor, the edits aren't helping this IMHO.