I wouldn't have included the edge of the tablecloth here. It gives the setting a kind of uneasiness like you might not feel comfortable sitting down there to eat.
Also, a lit candle and some silverware might have complemented the subdued light/pasta-eating atmosphere you've got going. Maybe even some backlighting just for the glass bottles - they look great with backlighting. More so in color, but with the right tweaks that could help you even in B&W. |