My eye is drawn towards the hair and shoulder more than the face in this image. composition is good nice model and the daisies in the hair are cool. possible use of off camera flash for face lighting and catch light in the eye, or brightened her face and dimmed the shoulder in pp would of resulted in a stronger image imo, i would of liked the end of the stick weapon to be in focus too, love the serious look on her face tho, she defo means business !