this is a nice shot, possibly a bit more cropping (the girl in the back, the lower legs of the man) would have done this some justice. the stop sign is a nice touch though
I like your concept. I think I would have cropped a little more - still showing context, but elimenating some distraction. The colors seem oversaturuated to me. That seems to be the "fashion" here though. So I may be a minority opinion.
Nice candid shot.
Maybe if cropped it more, leaving only the mans face and a part of the nespaper it could help. Now I think it's the man who is the subject, not the paper. It's a bit confusing. The picture has candid feeling, which I always appreciate.