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I like how all the snail details tie the photograph together, the colors are lovely, and I especially like that you took care to write an actual letter since the text is readable. My only nitpick would be that both the envelope and letter were printed on a computer...so why is there a pen lying there? The pen is an important visual signal for the viewers, since it enforces the idea of a letter in progress, so the change I would suggest would be for the signature to be done in pen instead of being printed like the rest of the letter. |