Critique Club Comment
Evocative of an earlier time when printed words weren't limited by character, or screen size, or attention span. When handwriting was an art form. As a "vintage" photo, I'm not sure the color variation between the Autograph book and the smaller (redder) one above it, really works. Compositionally, I think it might have been better to eliminate the dark empty area in the center left. Overall, an attractive image that works to bring my imagination to the past. |