Greetings from the Critique Club!
Quite a pleasant image to look at and definitely meets the challenge descrip. Interesting comp, I like that the girl is slightly out of focus and the sparklers nice and sharp. The colours seem a little odd, as noted already. Also, I have to join those who are left cold by the white vignette. It seems that vignette use is very hit and miss, and really doesn't seem to do well for fairly close shots like this as they come across as claustrophobic.
Otherwise a decent effort, I do hope you continue to keep entering.
Susan |