Congrats Tyler! This was an impressive picture and an excellent debut. I really liked the tight crop and sense of intimacy you show in the secret communication between the girls. I agree with the comments about over sharpening or too much compression - many JPEG artifacts are visible, but it is a really nice composition otherwise. I expect we will see some excellent shots from you. Jus don't steal your dad for your photos... I already have him under contract as my favorite model. Keep up the good work!