My two daughters telling secrets to each other. This picture took quite a few attempts because Emily (on the right) kept laughing..this one was my favorite of the bunch.
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Great work here. By far your best image and you are certainly moving in the right direction. My warm congratulations on your top 20 finish. To get an even higher score avoid borders. I like them, but there is shool everywhere that hate them on principle. Regardless, rejoyce. Good job.
Thanks for your great comments, what was I thinking with this ugly border? Oh well, Im learning, wont do it next time...heh. Thanks again everyone!
Great work here. By far your best image and you are certainly moving in the right direction. My warm congratulations on your top 20 finish. To get an even higher score avoid borders. I like them, but there is shool everywhere that hate them on principle. Regardless, rejoyce. Good job.
Excellent expression in the right models face! Great use of catchlights in her eyes. You are very overexposed though blowing out a lot of the detail in both the models tops. If you were shooting for a high key approach, you missed it by a smidge. I see this in the discolored background. Compositionally, the negative space to the right appears to off balance the shot. Cropping with a couple sheets of paper held up to my monitor, cutting off a third of the model on the left (say right behind her ear) and the dead space on the right makes a much cleaner composition with more oomph.
TC
Yep, I like this one. A real change between all these boring pictures of empty cans...
It's not perfect, the background looks a bit wrinkled and the High-key effect looks not realy 100% to me, but I'll score you 8 now, and revisit it later, maybe score you even higher...
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