Voted earlier coming back to comment.
Lighting is good, color is good and the details in the fabric and zipper are well done. The composition is what holds the photo back. Either angle or leading lines can help increase visual appeal as that generally straight on shots don't hold the eye's attention for very long. One suggestion I have to increase the visual appeal is to have the two sides of the zipper on top come out from the top left and top right corners....making the letter 'y' which coincidentally would nicely correspond with the first letter of "Y" seen stamped into the metal zipper tab. |