A stone tossed into the still lake. The lake was reflecting thec louds at sunrise. I left the little bit of grass in there to give it some perspective.
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great idea, bud. i think it would be worth revisiting, with the splash close to where it is, but not so pinned into the corner, and with just a bit more grass--not a lot, but just a bit more.
The grass in the lower left is distracting to me. The concept is great though... I think it would be more successful if simplified to the splash and the water around it.
interesting, i think a little bit tighter of a crop to help show the detail in the splash would be nice but not too much because the comp is great but the grass im not sure about..
I'm sorry, but this isn't one of my favorites in the challenge. I'm not sure why you chose to keep the grass spriggs in the shot, and it's taking an awful lot of eye strain to see what that splash subject actually is.
4. The image and composition you were shooting for just doesn't work for me. The blades of grass on the lower left simply distract me from the focus which I believe to be the splash according to the title. Also, putting the splash closer to the rule of 3rds might have helped ease the issue of negative space a bit.
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