I like the bridge, and find the concept interesting. The sky brings the image down a bit, for me. The power line tower distracts a bit as well. The main influence is the sky. A large bland patch that darkens the bridge, and does not bring its own drama to the table.
I'd like to see this image again, earlier, or later, in the day when the sun lights the steel more dramatically.
A more centered composition, could highlife the leading lines of the tracks and the symmetry of the construction. |