First thing I see is the very exposed center portion of the photograph surrounded by a rather severe vignette. Then I see the colors under the the branches and around the head in relationship to the rest of the tree and wonder why that was done and how and why you did that.
I think if you recompose the shot, that you have a set here that would lend you some leading lines. Perhaps a tighter crop, eliminating the vehicle on the right. I would also try for true backlighting, not vignetting.
When I went back again to read the title, I see what you may have wanted to try to do. |
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