This is too out of focus to be appealing for my tastes and the colors appear overly processed, whether they are or not in reality. I do love the colors, though.
I assume you intended the soft focus and blown highlights, but it doesn't resonate with me. Also, the highly saturated color hurts my teeth. Sorry iof this seems negative. It's just how I react to it.
extremely shallow DOF spoils this picture, which otherwise has gorgeous color. Try to lead the viewer from one side of the shot to the other - turn the subject a bit so it's not "punching" the viewer in the face.
if it had to be out of focus (I hope you did that intentionaly) you could make it less blurred so on ecould tell what it is. I don't understand the 'out-of-focus' idea here