looks like a lot of action. All the people make an interesting composition. it is very busy, which can be ok and the people make a nice sort of 'blank' background, but the action in the image, which is perhaps the large flag, is very centered and in a 'boring' position in the photo. It is perhaps a little light, or too low contrast. I don't see any dark blacks... it is good to see the whole range of grey, from total white, to total black, with grey's in the middle.. even if it is a high key (very white) or dark image... there should be a good tonal range.
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