Challenge:Parts (Basic Editing I) Camera:Creative PC-Cam 880 Location: on a table at a home located in karachi pakistan Date: Oct 2, 2004 Date Uploaded: Oct 4, 2004
My problem with this photo is the focus. I can't really find anything in sharp focus. If the boy's eyes were sharply focused, for example, it would raise this 3 or 4 points for me.
This is a great idea. It is a bit grainy, and the highlights in the upper right are very strong. But, the composition is also very strong. Love the expression on the kid (errr, I mean model.)
One suggestion for improving the photo would be to crop the overexposed are on the right. I also think the boy's face needed some more light. Just my opinion :)