I love what you were going for here! You've made a really good capture of motion.
But... what I think is lacking is... the detail in the liquid in the glass.
On my monitor it appears as ... blackness.
It leaves me wanting... more.
*sigh*
(commenting only)
Edit to add: I've found "more"!
Look at: "Crystal Blue Persuasion" They left the "blue" in the glass.
I don't know how... I can't do what you've done... I don't do motion well, but... see the photog on that image for tips if you want to grow in what you obviously are interested in.
I love your composition... just get the technique.
And...
Then teach me.
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