The lighting needs some work - doesn't give the image enough punch. Other than that, I like the composition of the image although I would have preferred that it wasn't cropped as tight on the top of the image. I wouldn't want this for dinner
I like the extra light on the black background, but the lighting and focus on your main subject could be better. Wacky idea though. How did it taste? Did you put mustard or chocolate syrup on it?