A solid shot with a few niggles. I think you missed the framing slightly. Had you shot looser you could have cropped in to center the arch exactly, having more black on the right and the left is a distraction from the action; likewise having lots of shadow above the arch but cutting off the bounce on the floor steals a bit of thunder. If you had been able to get that arc of bounce light completed instead of cutting it off with the bottom of the frame, it would have been a lovely complement of the main arc, and created a truly complete static frame for the main action.
The color space looks a bit yellow green. It could be that you were going for an antique look for the album so it may be intentional, but in presenting single images people will assume it is an error if your whites are not balanced.
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