This is really good. Very creative! I think it should have scored much higher (I didn't vote in this challenge, but one vote wouldn't have helped too much anyway). Nice job. Keep shooting!
Could be more on focus. If you make these plums more shiney would get better reflection on eyes. Some distraction spots on his face...but i guess you couldnt replace that vedgetable.
If the lighting wasn't so bad, if the background wasn't so overwhelming, if the subject was centered and given some texture via contrast, then this would've done much better! Good effort though...
the face is out of focus, needs depth of field more to the front. Also poor background, next time iron out the wrinkles, or take a different material, put it out of focus, or overexpose so it becomes totally white.