I found this photo a little to dark in the contrast zone. The male on the left of the girl. His shirt and his hair is so dark there is not definition. I think you have a great idea here and composed rather well!
Nice BW but I'm not feeling the crop here. It starts me off with the smiling bikers and leads me to those two men with sourpuss faces. It's like a movie with a great begining and a bad ending.
Well framed, well captured. I would wish for just a bit less post-processing to avoid the over-sharpness I detect (esp. around edges of the man on the right), but that is perhaps just my preference. Really well done otherwise. Feels very natural :)