Voted earlier coming back to comment.
I am having trouble finding a point to call the main subject or a leading line that draws and holds my eye in this redux. In the original the wood railing came out from the bottom right corner and flowed out to the center so that the eye could travel along the composition and take in the shapes and lines gradually. In the redux it is all there front and center with no clear path for my eye to settle on. It is just too much a lovely jumble for the eye to take in all at once. It does look like a nice place to sit, relax and read a book but it needs a main character to stand out for me to take notice of the sense of place of this story;-) |
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