Voted earlier coming back to comment.
Love the glow of autumn colors that frame the flow of the water cascading down. Very serene and beautiful. Love the silky flow of the water. There is one thing from the original that I feel is needed here in the redux. The original has a sense of grounding. Here there is dark, negative space surrounding the main subject that if feels like it is 'floating' in space. Most especially I get the feel of not being grounded when I look at the bottom of the composition where the water just 'ends' and there is nothing but blackness below it. |