Cool idea and when you get more knowledge about lighting I'd suggest doing a reshoot. Needs a stronger composition like a different angle and even lighting.
That's a good idea! But I don't really like the plain backround. To make this more effective I would have put it in with a bunch of other apples, so it stands out as the 'wannabe'
I would have preferred it lit from the front instead of the back and side. Also, the peel has portions at the top front of the image that are out of the focal plane which become somewhat distracting. I do like the POV though.
hey! you shoot looks similar with one in my portfolio! Have a look, it is a funny shoot in both cases. Pitty yours it a little out of focus in the nearest apple... may be more light (and closing diafragm aperture) would have helped. Try making macro shoot with zoom at a half, not at wide, it is more on focus and globaly better,
very nice the frist that i saw that was "out side the box" (to use a turm all to cleshay)
one gripe how ever- would have liked harder focus on the edges of the apple skin.
but i like the focus on the surrfus of the oriange