Hi Amanda, ditto JulietNN the black line through it killed it for me. Is your monitor brightness too low so you didn't notice it during PP? (It got a 6, possibly 8 without the line)
Nice rim lighting on this, I am sure people have said something about the colour though, maybe doing a layer in black and white and just reducing op, to take a slight hint of the colour out, not much just a little. But the biggest problem you have is that thick solid black line running through it, a shame 5