This was a really great idea. I think it would score better if it was photographed in a more 'stock photo' fashion, like on a white background at a different angle, great idea!
Whats that drink company that does strange sounding flavor mixes? It would be interesting to see some of your hybrids in front of corresponding bottles :)
A little different crop and some work on the lighting (more from the front and reduce the glare on the table) would make the photograph have more impact I think.
such a good idea, but it just doesn't look good! the setup leaves much to be desired. you could've gotten away with just one of these mixedfruits, against a crisp dark background, with decent lighting, and it would've been stellar! but, i score for creativity too :)
Interesting composition, but I find the table top distracting... a colored tablecloth with less glare might help and would highlight the light refraction through the glass of water.