This definitely captures the slice of life happening on this street corner. The B&W tones are good. But with all the players in the scene, I am having trouble figuring out who or what is the main subject of your visual story. Is it the cameraman on the right? Is it the bubble artist near the middle? Is it the person with the big hair that looks like they are on the phone? Or the child walking by? I'm guessing that I am not the only one feeling lost in the shuffle and trying to get a focal point. There is just too much going on here to find the focal point. I think your visual 'story' would be much clearer if the frame had fewer characters and also a clear action or interaction between them.
There's so much happening in this that I normally find it so confusing to try to comprehend what is going on .. but the more I look at it the more I can see why you posted it! 8
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