Well, OK. I get the concept, even though I'm really not much of one for gratuitous boobage. But it's funny so I'll give ya the benefit of the doubt.
The biggest problem is probably the soft focus of the shot overall. I don't know if this was done intentionally or not, but I don't think it works for this image.
The bit of background and the portion of the model's arm on the left detract from the photo. Also, the fact that the ... uh ... "paradise" is cut off on the bottom of the photo is a problem. A plain background that focuses more on "paradise" probably would have scored much better.
The soft focus might have worked better with either more, or less. The hair distracts a bit, perhaps cropping it out could help. Clever take on the theme. 7
Focus and exposure are way off. it's just a shot of boobs. Had this even remotely been in focus, I might have thought you took some time with the shot, however, I really don't see any artistic value in this shot what so ever. Sorry.
could've gotten more detail on the lace maybe without a flash, just a long exposure, ask the lady to hold real still. how will you know if folks if are voting for you or for the young lady?