Your focus should be on her touching her belly but your lighting causes the eye to focus on her breast. (Plus it's a little washed out) I think the photo could be greatly inproved by adjusting the lighting to cause the breast to be secondary and not so obvious.
I think the right side of the shot needs more light. The harsh lighting to the left lowers my mood when I look at the shot & I generally think of impending motherhood as a mood lifter...Just my opinion...
I really like this one. Love the colours and contrast. I somehow do feel uncomfortable with how it's cropped from her neck Makes me wonder if this shot would have worked better with may be a wee bit of her chin. Because of the positioning of her shoulders, it does create the look of a chicken from the frozen counter. That's what I am uncomfortable with. But as I said before, I think it's a great shot.
The wide angle of this shot is not very flattering for your model. This makes it look like she has a tiny neck/head and huge thighs.. I hope you have some more photos to cherrish from her pregnancy, it's a special time for all.. 6
Great photo! A bit shocking and a bizzar look at the challenge of touch but well executed. Color, sharpness and border all well done. I like how the wide angle adds to the bizzar nature of the photo and the harsh side lighting adds to the shock factor. 8
Everything in this photo draws my eyes away from the life. The choice of chair, the distracting shadows, the starkness of the bare breasts, the seeming discomfort in the shoulders, the decapitated mother, the hands covering too much. Ack, life is the LAST thing I thnk in this photo; sorry. 5
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