I think this is an excellent abstract, and it fits your song title very well! If I'm not mistaken, that song is all about 'abstract' and such things :) I love the color in this image.
I can't really offer any suggestions for improvement here because I have a feeling that you achieved exactly what you set out to do here, and did it very well.
I have no idea why it scored so low. I will go read the comments you got later and see if I can determine that. The only thing that I could possibly assume is that 'abstract' is widely misunderstood and it is rarely judged for it's merit here on DPC. I think that is unfortunate, but it seems to be true. I think you have an image here that is worthy of printing...
Keep up the good work :)
John Setzler
** after reading the comments you got, I do believe that you may have suffered score points from the 'i don't understand or care for abstract' crowd....
I am not one for any kind of abstract art and that follows into photograhy. I wouldl have enjoyed this much better with a crisp shot of a real or stuffed rabbit. I am sure you are trying to portray something but it just doesn't work for me.5. Thanks for the explanation.
Take my comments for what they are worth for I am just a novice with a new camera. Dodo
Appropriately trippy. Nice surreal piece. The bubble in the glass below the ears, ouch (at least, that's what it looks like). Funny shot. Challenge met. This one grows on a person. Initially scored as a 6, upgraded to 7. Swash
When I first looked at it it looked like a blob of paint, but sitting here I see what it is. And am seeing more detail. I do like it for some odd reason. Nice colors. You will probable do poorly with the voters. They don't care for this stuff. Good luck.
You couldn't prove it by me. It's too out of focus for me to recognize it. The splashes of color around it are just I don't know what. Looks like you tried to make it to look like a modern painting. Am I right. Not too bad as that. As a photo I can't score more than a 2. PTL