This scene obviously has a lot of story to tell. Unfortunately, The focus is on the back wall, instead of the table. And the processing creates some odd features.
In my opinion this could be an outstanding image. As is its over processed. Needs to be tack sharp. And I put a figure in the chair in austere clothing head in hands. And a stronger vignette around the perimeter to draw the eye to the light and the figure.
appears you have used the tilt shift/filter or also known as toy camera to some iphone fans... not a bad attempt, but feel it would have worked better with a different processing