Good imagination, a very cool picture I like it. It could use more DOF or a faster shutter (or maybe the card just looks out of focus cause It´s taken though a glass)
ouch, i hope it was broken beforehand. anyway, i like the idea but have just one suggestion. if your camera had a white balance function (or if you adjusted it later in photoshop), this image might've looked more 'stock' (depending if you like that feel or not, but i do) with brighter whites. otherwise, good work.
great image but i am not a fan of the position of the glass with the space to the left and right... it draws a lot of attention to the edge of the glass and the edge of the frame.