I love your smoke and all the beautiful color and movement I just wish that the glare on the background...possibly from your flash was not there. I would like this more if the background was black and a tighter crop to showcase the smoke more.
Lovely smoke trails -- just not sure about the face on flash! Really is a distracting element. If the flash was to the side, it would've had a lot more punch!
Titles should not help the photo reveal itself and in this case your title does that wonderfully. I cannot see an old woman in there, but hey, I fail Rorschach tests too. The in your face flash is very distracting and I find I'm averting my eyes from even a photo. Too harsh light (light smoke from the side is best I think).