Hey, Critique Club here :)
First and foremost this is a great traditional portrait, nice lighting, nice blurred b/g and it fills the frame nicely. I am also a fan of the slight vignette. Also, it's nice and sharp.
The only change I would make is what you already noted, a white reflector to bounce some light into the face, especially the eyes, would have done wonders.
On a side note, I feel like your eyes are penetrating my soul.....
Keep Shooting!
J |