If I saw it in colour I'd ask for it to be in B&W :) Nice location and shot!
I like it, and it works for the challenge but a model in here would do wonders :)
Some write their 'voice' in journals or books and some choose to do it on walls. These walls certainly do 'talk'. Though I don't know if the one writer truly found 'a peace of mind within the shattered rooms' - all the other 'voices' seem to drown that one out. B&W tones are excellent and the composition is great. There are two 'views' here amoung the 'voices'. There is the windows with the view outside and then the closed and fallen door that leads nowhere. The mood overall in the composition is bleak and desolate. It makes one think of the 'spaces' we occupy or abandon.