This makes me smile! Love the story in thirds, too - the trees, the house and powerlines in the valley, and the wistful young man taking it all in. Really nice!
I really like the mood of this, and the sense of wonderment from him in an obviously abandoned place. But the balance, composition and crop are off for me. I also feel the lighting is just a bit flat, especially for a "Jagar" image. To my eye it needs more contrast.