I love the profile and expression captured. IMO she seems ready for action, covering that part of the challenge. Top part of picture feels a bit overexposed though and I might have cropped a bit or the sky out so the player would have filled more of the frame. Gave this a 6.
Someone more experienced will have to give you better comments than me, because it seemed to lack clarity but I can't really tell why. Perhaps a brightness-contrast adjustment? The cars in the background are distracting, too. I thought the "model" had a great pose, tho. Good idea.
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