image has a lot to like however its missing something. For one the water needs more definition, it get lost on the sky. I wonder if maybe the color would have been more effective, even if quite muted, something to help the definition of the water. Maybe try pushing the clarity?
Good b&w conversion. Nice translucent wave frozen in action. The bench and the bricks are my least fav parts of the scene. The wave splash against the stormy sky is my favorite part.