i wanna be - your lipstick when you lick it
i wanna be - your high heels when you kick it
i wanna be - your sweet love babe - ya when you make it
from your feet up to your hair - more than anything i swear
i wanna be - your underwear
from the album "18 til i die"
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Interesting photograph for the Song Title challenge! This photo captures the texture of silk very well, although I find the blue silk in the background tends to draw my attention away from the subject. Lighting and focus are very effective.
I believe the composition could be improved by playing with the location of the underwear within the frame. The bottom fifth of the photograph does not contain the subject -- could the photograph be improved by making better use of this area? One interesting composition might be to move the camera back a few feet, and position the underwear so that it breaks up the background into more definite shapes.
Thanks for all your comments, folks. Glad only one of you had a problem with my underwear!! Never had a complaint before, so I don't think you should take up fashion critiques as a living, achiral.
Funny story about the underwear...
When travelling to Africa, my lugguage was lost and I only had the clothes on my back. The country I was in (Niger) is very poor and doesn't have shopping malls like the western world is used to, and I guess underwear isn't a big priority there either. Couldn't find it anywhere, so I had to have it made specially for me - whipped up in an afternoon!!
Very odd, bargaining for underwear next to a pen of chickens!!
Cute and lightly provocative! Nice shot. (flesh would have been nicer! Smile! Wink!) Very good color/focus. Interesting framing. Challenge well met.
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