Nice b/w picture. I usually don't comment on border treatments, but in this case the treatment bothers me just a bit. IMHO it takes away from a picture that is quite strong on its own. I think I would probably try a crop to just about where your "fuzzy" sections start. But I may be wrong :) It's a very crisp shot though, looks a bit like it came out of a noir film. I hope you do well in the challenge. ~8
This works well. My only complaint is the highlight on the clock which is a bit blown out. Still the composition is very good and the picture evokes a more peaceful time.