I'm still at odds with this, one minute its great as is, the next I want to crop out the blinds and just see the incense sticks and vase. As a smoke challenge entry I think it would be more dramatic without the blinds, and as something you (will) hang on your wall, the blue/green mix is fantastic.
Some enormously serious sharpening gone on here, huh? was that to get the smoke trails some definition? If so, selecting their area and then sharpening that would have prevented those very strong jaggies on the sticks themselves. It's unfortunate, and ruins a fine effort.