This is a nice composition. My main gripe is the reflection/glare along the top half. TThat strip of reflection along the top prevents this from being as strong as it could be. It might help some to adjust the black level and play with the saturation some as that area just seems rather washed out. You can always watch for things like this and grab someone around to stand and block the reflection. For that reason, it's also a good idea to wear black when you might be shooting through glass :o) I'd like to see this with the lights actually. I'm not sure how much control you had over the conditions but you could have also tried a different setting with fewer distracting reflections.
Great composition. I think all these greys work well with the odd dash of red and yellow. Its abstract qualities make it one of the pictures of the week for me.
I really love this it was a great idea and exectuted fairly well. I would have given this shot a 10 if there was not the light washout withthe reflection on the top few inches of the shot. But still great job.7.
Take my comments for what they are worth for I am just a novice with a new camera. Dodo
Really neat abstract, good eye! Very busy image but still pleant to look at. I just find the faded section on top a little distracting. Not really sure how that could be fixed.