thanks everyone, i tried to keep this as simple and as much staight out of the camera as i could, i didnt want to photoshop anything out or even add to it even if it that was allowed, just shoot in one go and simply process as little as possible so i really appreciate the comments from everyone :O)
literal take, but my top pick for the super processing and simplicity. sometimes an interpretation like this can really stand out as you have shown here. (without the distractions above i'd have bumped up another point.)