(post challenge) I'd like to whine about minimal editing but it's really all my fault... the shoot was tough as the girl's never modelled before so between laughing and covering herself I had to shoot and direct her into poses, plus the lighting was horribly tricky as we were in a hair-cutting studio so lights everywhere... My idea for this was much more glamour style and no iPad but as usual we had to adapt to the situation. Thanks for the votes and comments.
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good idea but execution needs a lot more work. Crop out the black sliver on left, have model's face visible and straight on to camera. Ghosting on right of frame too, light looks drab.
Lovely model and good concept for the challenge. The black triangle lower left edge distracts -- minimal doesn't allow cropping, so in-camera quick look at all the edges becomes important (a composition skill I frequently forget, which makes me more aware of it). Could use a bit more exposure to make the whites more glaring (befitting the dramatized setting). If in an auto exposure mode (where the camera tries to make majority of picture neutral grey), exposure compensation can do that (tweak based on preview or histogram, if the camera has these features).
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