I'm going through the entries, stopping at those images I feel have had the benefit of an unconventional eye and dwelling a little longer to try to see and appreciate what you saw. This is one of those images.
Positives:Great immersion - I'm one of the crowd. Although the girl is masquerading as the primary interest, the background guy is the one that make the image. Of course you know that and I know you know that. This is an image with dialogue, I like that.
Critical stuff: There's something slightly amiss with her head - over-sharpening?