Answer: No
Question: Can I come out of the corner now?
IMO, you've made effective use of light and shadow in this image, and using a break (the shoes & their shadows) in a strong horizontal line to draw the eye to your subject.
I do not understand your question so cannot give a yes or no response.
I don't find the composition particularly interesting, but the technical aspects of darks/lights and tonal range has been handled really nicely.
are they going to jump? No....nice use of dark shadows to obscure the subject and his/her intentions or what ever it is they are doing..really lets the viewer wonder.