Really like everything except the harshness of the light and the difference between the eyes especially; just don't think it matches the composition and mood as well as it could.
The one shadowed eye really hurts this shot a lot. Having an eye shadowed really doesn't fit with the tone of this shot at all. Otherwise, this is a wonderful shot that I really enjoy. Nice crop. Without the shadow over the eye this is probably a 9. As is, I'll say a 7.
I love the way she is "posed", and the nice tight composition. I would like to see more light on her whole face, especially on the right - on my monitor, the shadows around her eye make it almost look like she has a black eye!
IMHO...the shadow casted upon the subject's right side and particularly the eye is a bit distracting. Otherwise good shot, nice frame fill and very cute subject. Good luck!
My pick of the week, good luck. This is a great image. I worked hard on my submission and it is also of children. But, it is nowhere near as good as this image, I hope that you do well. 9