I'm afraid I'm not cut out for this kind of pictures. I look, look again, feel a little puzzled, think I recognize something,start doubtng again and in the end I scroll to the next picture, a little frustrated...
This is a tough challenge to vote. I'm torn between "what are you trying to do here" and "what do I expect here". Further complicating matters is the question "what would I do here".
What I would expect would be a technically strong piece of eye-candy that would present the dessert in a way that I would want to at least sample it, if not order it. Along these lines I'm looking at technicals: backgrounds, distracting elements, exposure, sharpness. I'm also looking for creativity, imagination, and originality, which can make up for less than perfect technicals.
I looked at this for quite a while and just don't get it. I understand the play on words but on my monitor it is so grainy and blurry that I honestly can't make out what you wanted to bring to the viewer.