Greetings from the Critique Club :)
When I first viewed this photograph, I did not really see 'Travel' in it. The image itself does not show travel taking place or a mode of travel. I do see your intent with the photo, but I think, in general, you may have deviated too far from the theme of the challenge to score better with this image.
I think a little lower angle possibly would be an improvement so that the information on the computer screen is more visible to the viewer. With an image like this, however, the viewer will have to spend too much time viewing to really grasp your interpretation of the challenge. For this reason, I believe that your comments were few and far between. There is nothing here that grabbed the viewer and said "spend some time looking at me" :)
Technically, I don't see any problems with this image at all. Subjectively, I think it could have been stronger.
The technical ability tells me that you can definitely have command of your camera... keep plugging :)
John Setzler
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